Bad, choppy animation. Terrible art design. Awful pacing.
The sound design is ATROCIOUS. You're not being artistic by altering the speed of a well-known song this much. You're just being irritating. Especially when you're making harsh cuts between scenes.
If you had a story in mind, it's unintelligible. Again, this isn't artistic. It's just irritating. Your job as a writer and animator is to deliver information to your audience. You can shroud it, but it should be at least hinted at.
You're relying too much on shock value. Much like GG Allin. But he had a method to his madness. He was delivering a message. You are not.
i am deleviring a message
the message of g g allin
That and the fact that illusion and reality are interchangeable, a hot chick is really just a rotting pile of bones, and if you wander into a mausoleum with some lube and blow you'll have one hell of a night!
The bass drum sounded like a crappy tom. The controls were muddy and akward. The response was poor and unstable. You need to make it sort of sound like a real drum set. It only makes sense if the progression of sounds in the drums go lower in pitch as it goes to the right.
OMFG, it's a video! 0/5!
Got 8088. I am the king of luck.
would've sounded better if you were in tune. also would've sounded better if you were strumming more than one string.
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