Bad, choppy animation. Terrible art design. Awful pacing.
The sound design is ATROCIOUS. You're not being artistic by altering the speed of a well-known song this much. You're just being irritating. Especially when you're making harsh cuts between scenes.
If you had a story in mind, it's unintelligible. Again, this isn't artistic. It's just irritating. Your job as a writer and animator is to deliver information to your audience. You can shroud it, but it should be at least hinted at.
You're relying too much on shock value. Much like GG Allin. But he had a method to his madness. He was delivering a message. You are not.